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and this is where i fall apart, bleeding
but not as we know it.
you emptied me of sunsets, of the sweet scent
worn by summer air,
of the silence found in longing, the wish
for something far away.
you scraped off a layer of my skin,
there were dancers and drifters, bound by
rhythm but not by time.
(i was a child, wandering, sipping the atmosphere
like tap water.)
you demanded truth in layers of secret pathways,
but lost yourself in tangled ribbons,
choking us both like frightened snakes.
but not as we know it.
you emptied me of sunsets, of the sweet scent
worn by summer air,
of the silence found in longing, the wish
for something far away.
you scraped off a layer of my skin,
there were dancers and drifters, bound by
rhythm but not by time.
(i was a child, wandering, sipping the atmosphere
like tap water.)
you demanded truth in layers of secret pathways,
but lost yourself in tangled ribbons,
choking us both like frightened snakes.
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Extinguished
I have met some girls, a few
in particular, in my
past who have had what you
would consider to be
strange habits.
Like, a blonde who kept me warm
and always smoked but
hardly ate. I guess
her stomach was always
filled to burst with smoke,
so there was no place for
food or much else.
She was always so
funny and
so easy to talk to
that it was hard
not to like her.
It was like staring
into a fire.
When she and I both died
for someone else, it
was okay and I left
without any tears (they had
burned up). But I
didn't have to search long;
I trip and spark like any other
hopeful loner.
This one stood on glowing
coals, push
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haiku- morning after
Bedsheets gone, he smokes,
she sleeps with hand on his thigh
and dreaming of fire.
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have I
heaven is not a place for
wanderers, witch-talkers,
women with words
between their teeth.
for a woman, any passion
is a sin, any determination
a grievous error.
I am not to taste of
love, that potion
beautiful, despairing
and rare
I am a bondservant only.
and so I'll not say a word
but oh, have I lived.
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(the child in parenthesis is hiding but she speaks to me like the half-voices i hear when the wind creaks open doors)