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in the distance, fading

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i never said my goodbyes,

one rainy night
i climbed

out of my window,
out into

rain puddles, pine trees
and songs.

the night slowly froze everything,
ice humming its way

into my lungs,
skies breathing snow.

when you wake up tomorrow
frost will cover the tree branches

and i will be gone.
Trying out a more simplistic style than my usual one, just for practice. What do you think?
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forestmeetwildfire's avatar
Hello! This is just to let you know that I have used your title in my poem life, love, and all that jazz. :)