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by ~EternalSunday

raspy voice, like a demon begging for mercy.  she was
always a broken melody,

a puzzle
with no corner pieces.

i can see her,

drenched by the truth in her own
words, "i am just

a crack in the concrete,
marked

by the footsteps
of people like

you."
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Inspired by the song Le Tunnel D'or by Aaron. I didn't understand a word of the lyrics, and somehow that made it feel even more beautiful.
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Given 2012-03-05
passerby by ~EternalSunday The suggester says, "The line 'a puzzle / with no corner pieces' grabbed me right there, and wouldn't let go." ( Suggested by `HaveTales-WillTell and Featured by ^thorns )
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Wonderful poem.

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~EternalSunday Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)

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Wonderful work! I love you!

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~EternalSunday Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:

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~Throughdangersuntold Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very lovely. :)

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~EternalSunday Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)

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=LadyofGaerdon Mar 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Ooh this is so lovely! Congrats on your DD! :clap:

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~EternalSunday Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)

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Welcome. :)

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~harpyeaglelover Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
how do you create a fan fiction i dont have the program on my computer or something....
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